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Idolon wrote:
Looks really neat, RC. Don't forget to put red lights by the laser and buttons - little colorful accents like that can make a chamber look really nice. On the same note, have you thought about adding more recessed lights?

Ah, I knew I forgot something like that. I put one on the Excursion Funnel but then it must have slipped my mind to place the others. Thanks for the heads up, I probably would have forgotten about it for good before releasing the map. :lol:

I have, however I'm still working with it, I some recessed lights on the floor up against some of the walls, however they aren't overly visible in the images provided. Nonetheless, yes there will be a few more in there if I can find proper places for them. :thumbup:

"...those who would break the rules and laws are reguarded as scum, but those who would abandon even one of their friends, are worse than scum." -Obito Uchiha
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My Maps/Projects:

[spoiler]Maps:
RBC 1 RBC 2
Blue Walls
Converting Propulsion
One Week Creation
Secondary Fire
Flings Speed Patience
Ongoing Projects:
Alive & Kicking: Chamber 18 Secondary Fire[/spoiler]

RubyCarbuncIe wrote:
Sorry to break the trend of Energy Ball guns, [...]

Sorry to not break the trend of this uninterrupted cavalcade of praise taking place here but that looks really, really good! A nice open design, pleasing colour palette, just the right amount of destruction / unfinishedness, creepy guy in the window, what's not to love.

Somehow, the contrast between the roughness of the exposed construction bits and the warm lighting gives a really special and pleasing effect. I'm gonna try that in my current project, see how it looks.

You can add some light strips, but don't overdo it, it may ruin the atmosphere!

Sendificate series: Sendificate | A Beam Too Far | Airtime | 302
Other Portal 2 maps: Medusa Glare
Portal 1 maps: Try Anything Twice | Manic Mechanic

Even though this is TF2, you guys might be interested in this. Valve recently added bumper cars as part of the Halloween update this year, and now kart racing is totally a thing you can do! A quick race track I made:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JprVXoVJmSY

Personally I'd change the part where you get teleported to just part of the track leading back around.

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Looks fun! For some reason, the ambient background music fits really well with this.
I do agree with CamBen about the teleporting. Making the track cyclic probably provides a more continuous "flow" to the action, if you know what I mean.

Sendificate series: Sendificate | A Beam Too Far | Airtime | 302
Other Portal 2 maps: Medusa Glare
Portal 1 maps: Try Anything Twice | Manic Mechanic

Wow, what happened to TF2 since the last time I played? I'm going to have to look into that now, that actually looks really fun.

Also, thanks HMW, sorry for not responding sooner, I've been preoccupied lately. xD

"...those who would break the rules and laws are reguarded as scum, but those who would abandon even one of their friends, are worse than scum." -Obito Uchiha
Youtube Channel My Workshop
My Maps/Projects:

[spoiler]Maps:
RBC 1 RBC 2
Blue Walls
Converting Propulsion
One Week Creation
Secondary Fire
Flings Speed Patience
Ongoing Projects:
Alive & Kicking: Chamber 18 Secondary Fire[/spoiler]

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"Oh, in case you got covered in that repulsion gel, here's some advice the lab boys gave me: DO NOT get covered in the repulsion gel."

Nice BTS area! Should the testchamber sign be lit up? I doubt the employees would plug in a sign if it's just sitting on the catwalk. If it's intentional, perhaps run a cable from the wires on the left into its side (if this isn't already the case).
I like the little handrail with lights on the conveyor belt!

My stuff:
[spoiler]- BEE2 Addons | (BEE2)
- Hammer Addons
Maps:
- Crushed Gel
- Gel is Not Always Helpful[/spoiler]
TeamSpen210 wrote:
Should the testchamber sign be lit up? I doubt the employees would plug in a sign if it's just sitting on the catwalk. If it's intentional, perhaps run a cable from the wires on the left into its side

Its powered by a radioisotope thermoelectric generator and is activated by a proximity motion sensor; The employees only involvement with it, is mounting it to the test chamber wall.

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"Oh, in case you got covered in that repulsion gel, here's some advice the lab boys gave me: DO NOT get covered in the repulsion gel."

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note overlay clipping on the bottom of the pic.

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