Quote from josepezdj on March 9, 2015, 6:52 am

RectorRocks wrote:

josepezdj wrote:

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Very impressive detailing, Jose! I would love to give it a try after it comes out, even if I know I have a low chance of completing it. Any idea when it'll be released?

Thanks mate! About difficulty, I promise this one is easy-medium, you'll let me know. I'm making it for the monthly P2LC group challenge "Out of sight" that I'm sure you are already aware of , so this means I'll release it some time within March.

RectorRocks wrote:

Anyway, I'm working on a mappack that has a little backstory in it. I'm not completely done with the story part yet but I can show you guys a little of what I've finished, hopefully it can be further improved.

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[spoiler]My first attempt at creating a Wheatley themed map. It's not exactly Wheatley themed, but more of the Co-op Course 4 theme.


The custom textures are a little pixelated, can I fix that problem?


I'm having a little trouble with the light glow of the lamp hanging model. I'm not exactly sure which values do I put in in order to make the glow stay as bright whereever the player moves



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Feedback would be much appreciated!

I'm not specially fond of the Wheatley theme, so I doubt I can give you any good advice, and I think those screenshots look amazing! I love the warm mood and the cleanness with the subtle aging that those missing tiles suggest. Anyway, I can't really approve the broken window glasses in the obs-rooms, since they look a bit out of place without a real broken surrounding... so I'd suggest you that when you want a broken window glass, just break the surrounding tiles, make them be crossed by a pipe or whatever

About the rest, I agree Pitkakorvaa, do as you like, remake the Wheatley's theme changing it how you like to get something fresher, better than just fitting to the theme.

Regarding the custom story pics, well, it doesn't look bad, but I haven't got much to say without seeing more of it

FelixGriffin wrote:

josepezdj wrote:

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I like the fizzler(?) you're using!

Thanks man, yes it's a custom fizzler based in one of the underground ones by Valve.