My first map with SDK. I would like to improve so I hoop you give your opinions. Enjoy =)

File Name: Tiraflo - 1.rar
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Keep trying! Aside from everything else, it's very easy to get stuck.

the puzzle was very easy, see some of the other laser maps for ideas on what can be done with lasers. Good first map.

Thank you for your comments.
xdiesp, I didn't see how you have got stuck, can you explain ?
quatrus there was 2 ways to finish the level, one easier found by a friend.

Try to finish it ... (warning spoiler)


without using the red walls on the screenshot

http://s3.noelshack.com/uploads/images/16166694778839_20110524_00001.jpg

If you have already finished the level without that ... I didn't say nothing ^^

By the way, sorry for my english, I'm belgian.

I liked the map alot!
At first i thought it was broken or something, i just couldn't figure out what to do, but once i found the solution i was like "DUH!" by the way i was able to use it without the walls you have there in the screenshot.
And the map was clean and nice, and well lit, 5/5 from me. (just a little small XP)

Tiraflo wrote:
didn't see how you have got stuck, can you explain ?

I didn't take pics, but ways involved pushing the cube with the blue funnel from inside the cabin. Or trying to take the cube from the cabin, and have it be locked inside (and not on the button).

looks halfway decent, although somewhat underexposed. Add more lights.
The puzzle was fairly easy, but i couldn't figure out what that funnel was for, didn't use it in either direction of suction.

I can see the funnel through the entrance wall. Walls are too thin in other places too. Intersection of funnel makes cube harder to maneuver. No proper ending. Just 2/5 from me, removed from playlist.

I'm playing custom maps and record my first time of playing them. So the run is not perfect and may not use only intended ways, but maybe it can let you see how other people may understand the map or you could just enjoy someone playing this map for entertainment.
Anyways, here is the recording:

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(Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aEPiA7YkGc4)

Also note the video description for more feedback and my signature for additional project information.