The first singleplayer map i upload to here,the map was created by my friend,but i upgarded and changed it (he isnt realy good my maping so he let me change his map)
there are also some parts in the map that are scary
Hope you enjoy it

how to play it:
1.copy sp_rusted.bsp to portal2/portal2/maps
2.when you in game, type in console:
map sp_rusted
Dont know how to enable console?
go to options
then keyboard/mouse
then enable the developer console (you will find a button)

File Name: sp_rusted.rar
File Size: 1.07 MiB
Click here to download Rusted

Ok first map. Keep working at it. Thanks for mapping.

Simple map, pretty good as a first map. Does the map end in the end of the walkable water? The map could use some detail, and it doesn't look like you're swimming in the water, you're literally walking on it. Jesus reference?

Again, no real exit, pretty short and easy but pretty nice as a first SP map.

quatrus-its not my first map but thanks
thecakeisaspy-its not the end,in the end you will also get disconnected to menu,and that you walking on the water its because that that the water are not so deep,just a little water

Pretty boring. No puzzles in here and it ends in a weird way that makes you ponder if this really is the end

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(Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nXqUx-q7voI)

got same ending as Djinndrache.... is it an error?

its not an error,i tried to make a creepy ending (i see i failed)
next time ill try making it harder

Like Dijinn, the map is boring.
To me the map was boring, short, and poorly constructed. I recommend setting your grid to x32 to prevent misaligned textures.
I recommend practicing mapping before releasing a map.

The textures for the portable surfaces weren't standard, they looked wrong, there were some thin walls that I could see around, and the whole thing was rather boring.

Hey dude,

I love Portal and want to collect some gameplays (first blind run), speedruns and bug reports.
My records should help you to understand how the player thinks.
Well, I hope I can support you with my uploads to fix any bugs and make new awesome maps.

Here are yours!

gameplay
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Djinndrache wrote:
No puzzles in here and it ends in a weird way that makes you ponder if this really is the end

/sign

btw: why you want to make your maps always be "scary"? oO

THX for mapping...

Keep it up!

thanks!
but i dont know,i like special stuff

noam2000 wrote:
its not an error,i tried to make a creepy ending (i see i failed)
next time ill try making it harder

I liked the puzzle OK but,it would have been creepier to have the body come at you quicker and fade to black, continuing the creepy music for a while. That would lend a little question as to what happened. As it stands, it comes at you and just hangs there in your face until the game finally just kicks you to the main menu. It was like being in a haunted house with a dummy on a wire coming at me but, before it even got near me, I knew it was just a stupid dummy.