tractor beams_v2.5

by mousecracka · Uploaded Apr 25, 2012

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File Size: 0.04 MB

Downloads: 65

Rating: (3 votes)

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this is the first part of my new level let me know what you think. V.12 updated with some lights, stopped people from skipping first room, more textures and fixed portal gun. v2.5 one more room textures in second room are not the same. let me know what you think i could improve on apart from it being to short im working on it. im not adding more rooms till this one is complete

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mousecracka • Apr 25, 2012 • #62196
18 posts

this is the first part of my new level let me know what you think.
V.12 updated with some lights, stopped people from skipping first room, more textures and fixed portal gun.
v2.5 one more room textures in second room are not the same. let me know what you think i could improve on apart from it being to short im working on it.

im not adding more rooms till this one is complete

File Name: actorv1.rar
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Logic • Apr 25, 2012 • #62197
298 posts

I'll edit this post instead of making a new one.

FEEDBACK
- It's spelled tractorbeams
- No lighting
- Picking up the Portal gun is buggy and takes several tries
- You can just shoot a portal up through the door and portal yourself up there
- Everything has the same texture!
- No frame around the excursion funnel
- You don't use your space, everything is crammed up in 1/4th of the map
- The map is too small and short in my opinion

This was not a good map. It's way to easy too cheat and there are no aesthetics or details to the map. The gameplay is uninteresting, short and buggy.

Try and refine your maps, play other peoples work and try and make something similar.

Lpfreaky90 • Apr 25, 2012 • #62198
2,842 posts

I had a lot of problems picking up the portal gun; it took me about 20 tries.
Because of the fact there were white surfaces everywhere I could skip the tractor beam and the cube part.
You should add a proper frame to the funnel.
You should add proper lighting to the map.

Still a lot to do ^^

Djinndrache • Apr 25, 2012 • #62199
1,442 posts

Ugly textures, only partially functional and fullbright. Even when considering that this map is a WIP, I can barely resist to delete this for poor quality...

KennKong • Apr 30, 2012 • #62200
942 posts

I recorded a blind playthrough for you, but I'm not going to waste even one minute posting it. Now I am blind, from this fullbright assault on the eyes. I didn't find anything different from prior posters, but I didn't try to break the non-puzzle. Do not release anything that needs this much work. This would be deleted by the moderators immediately. I don't rate WIP, but this is a 1.

I am available to playtest for you, just drop me a PM.

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