Currently working on my first map for Portal 2, and while I did a bit of dabbling with hammer when halflife 2 and then when Portal 1 came out nothing came of it.

Anyway, this is the 2nd room from my larger map, that I like some feedback on

You enter this test chamber through a broken door from the previous test chamber.

So far:

Puzzle done (might need tweaking - hence the testing haha)
Texturing - in progress (50%+ done i'd say)
Detailing - in progress

The rest of the map isn't with this as yet, as i've been learning as I go so the first room and some other things I won't go into (spoiler for the map otherwise lol) are in the process of being redesigned/updated.

Btw, this rooms puzzle will be part of a larger puzzle.

Any comments about anything in it is helpful!

File Name: deception_room2.zip
File Size: 679.47 KiB
Click here to download Deception

Wow, my map was originally called Deception before I changed it a couple of days ago haha!

Great start too. Keep it up.

Updated!

Puzzle is done...hopefully
Texturing - Near enough complete, theres one or two things to do, mainly the slime which keeps being annoying!
Detailing - 50-70% done so far, observation rooms to clutter and probably some general decay/weeds/broken tiles etc

Feedback always welcome!

note this is a straight forward puzzle, it's meant to activate a part of a larger puzzle in a different room, but as it's my first portal 2 map, i'd thought i'd put it up on here to get some feedback...after all, knowing how the puzzles done doesn't help test it!